poMotion poetry

You

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Can’t stand You.
You make me angry.
So many of You.
You are the heart and soul.
Everywhere You go I’m there.
You are in my every thought.
Can’t stand You.
You are here with me.
I cant stop thinking of You.
You left me!
Dead to me is what You are.
You’re just gone and why?
I miss You so much
Cant stand You.

By Ruby Holt

posted by Sue Zalokar

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Written by lickmypoetry

April 27, 2010 at 9:31 am

Posted in poem, poetry

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  2. I really like your poem, Ruby. It comes from the heart. Got anymore?

    Astrid

    May 4, 2010 at 8:06 pm

    • Thank you. I do have more poems me and Sue are working on…coming soon:)

      Anonymous

      May 12, 2010 at 12:31 pm

  3. Once, this is exactly what I wanted to say though i failed to put it into words that made sense, you worded it perfectly! The passion in this poem is unbelievable!

    Batty

    May 10, 2010 at 4:59 pm

    • thanks for the comment it took me a while to do it

      Anonymous

      May 12, 2010 at 12:35 pm


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