poMotion poetry

Writing a poem

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Writing a poem
following assumptions
revise and turn

understanding massages
autobiographical attack.
reason doesn’t help
engage or praise red wheel barrow

distance based on
They flee the ruined mind
not complete

texture, craft
paint, crazy ode
colored light techniques
sneaks around
to your thinking

do not shut
the book

(this is a poem I put together for a poetry class I took using words found on the syllabus, i think it turned out okay )

by Brian Feist


Written by lickmypoetry

June 25, 2010 at 4:32 pm

Posted in poem, poetry

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  1. I like ‘understanding massages autobiographical attack’ I had to read it to myself a couple of times to find the meter. Great poem.


    June 26, 2010 at 7:55 am

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