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“I don’t really know,” he said, his hands covered in blood, “h-how this happened.”
He could remember the screams and the cold rush of adrenaline climbing up his spine.
The face on the floor was contorted in such a way it seemed to be saying, “Ahh”
It had an almost angelic glow. The blood was sprawling out on the floor making wings for the departed soul.
“It wasn’t supposed to go like this,” he kept repeating in an awkward whisper.
He thought back to the chow mein he had earlier.
The cookie with its poigently phrased fortune:
“You will change someone’s life today.”

Written by lickmypoetry

May 4, 2011 at 1:57 pm

Posted in poem, poetry

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  1. Like the twist at the end.


    May 4, 2011 at 9:59 pm

  2. is awkward spelled wrong?

    I love this because it leaves SO much to the imagination.

    GREAT piece.


    May 5, 2011 at 10:42 am

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